We were learning about using powerful words our writing.
I found it easy to thank what I was going to write about because I really enjoyed the fun run.
I found it challenging to think of powerful words.
Next time I will write a bit more in my first paragraph.
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Kia Ora, Zane
ReplyDeleteMy favorite past was when paint got chucked in your mouth because you described the taste in your mouth,
Did you think about maybe using bold to make the onomatopoeia stand out more,
Maybe try change the background or the color of your font because I can't read some parts of the slide
Thank you for your feedback next time I will change my background like you have requested I didn't know that you can't read it on the background so thank you.
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