This writing session we were learning about retailing a video from one of the characters perspective.
In the session I found it easy to pick what character I would like to because the squirrel was really cool it did lots of jump.
In the session I found it hard to write a story from the squirrels perspective because he didn't do much but jump between branch and branch.
In out Next session to improve I will add more descriptive and Powerful language about the Hawk.
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