In writing we were make a creative recount about if we were in the 100m final at the Olympics and what it is taken to get there all the training and all the hard sacrifices you have made we were creating something about the Olympics because our enquiry at the moment is the Olympics and the Paralympics at the moment the Olympics have finished though and the power Olympics are going so we will switch to the Paralympics soon.
when doing this I really enjoyed pretending that I was going to the Olympics for the 100m sprint final because I am quite fast and real-life as well. I also really enjoyed the challenge to add motes in because it made it a bit more fun I had to make a mote for each paragraph because Mozart only last 30 seconds or shorter.
I found it a challenge to write about being at the 100m finals because I actually haven't been there and I didn't see it on the TV like some other people did so it was a challenge to figure out what happens when you're doing it. But from previous experience in School athletics I think I saw us to out pretty good.
Turn off site right about an Olympic events again I think I will have more descriptive language into my right there and maybe Baker make it a bit longer with more adjectives and adverbs cos this what's up one of my best writings.
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